Brad, Sophie, David Callum Rough Cut.mov

Audience Feedback.
we recieved our audience feedback from our group peers and took on board what they said. we got told which bits were good and which bits we needed to improve. seeing the film on the big screen also pointed out to us as a group of what we needed to do, to improve our film further to get a better grade. watching our film on the bigger screen made us understand better and what conventions we as a group needed to put in and what conventions had already worked well.
one criticism we got on our film is that people didn't really know the plot line as it was a little bit ambigious we are going to take this on board and but non diagetic sound in so this will tell us what is going on in the storyline.