Wednesday, 19 January 2011

Script for voiceover for Mystery

Script for voiceover:


Bradley Hope – Detective Macs Pain
David Leighton – Chief Constable Creedy


Phone rings

‘Macs, Rogue is in town. I need you to keep an eye on him, but whatever you do don’t engage. ‘

‘Boss, this guy is in town and you’re telling me I can’t engage?! He killed Lawrie boss, a good cop!’

‘Macs, don’t get ahead of your self you don’t stand a chance this guy is Lethal’.

‘I’m gonna get him, Lawrie deserves that at least.’

‘I am your commanding officer and you will do as I instruct, I want you to follow him, I want you to watch him but under no circumstances make contact, do I make myself clear or do I have to get Officer Stooge on the job?...

‘No, no Stooge is half the cop I am’

‘I know, that is why I put you on this assignment, there was no other way’.

‘Boss..’

‘I only gave you this because you’re the only one good enough to even keep up with him. If you engage I will take your badge, your gun and your job Macs.’

‘So be it.’

‘What?’

‘Listen to me, Creedy. I’m gonna follow that bastard, just as you asked. I’m gonna follow him, just like you asked, then I’m gonna do the rest. I’m gonna hunt him down, I’m gonna hurt him, and make him bleed, then I’m gonna make him beg. Then I’m gonna kill him. And there ain’t a god damn thing you can do about it.

‘Macs no! I know you were close to Lawrie but…’

‘Save it chief’

Beep

Tuesday, 18 January 2011

Final Edit Of Film



This is our final edit, starring David Leighton, Bradley Hope & Sophie Gilroy as filming.

Brad, Sophie, David Callum Rough Cut.mov


Audience Feedback.
we recieved our audience feedback from our group peers and took on board what they said. we got told which bits were good and which bits we needed to improve. seeing the film on the big screen also pointed out to us as a group of what we needed to do, to improve our film further to get a better grade. watching our film on the bigger screen made us understand better and what conventions we as a group needed to put in and what conventions had already worked well.
one criticism we got on our film is that people didn't really know the plot line as it was a little bit ambigious we are going to take this on board and but non diagetic sound in so this will tell us what is going on in the storyline.

Saturday, 1 January 2011

G321 Foundation Portfolio 2011: what we are going to do

The genre which we have choosen is film Noir.  We discussed this in our group and decided the ideas we had best have fitted the Film Noir genre.
The people i will work with is
Sophie Gilroy (me)
David Leighton
Bradley Hope
Callum Wilson.